The Next Life Stage Of A Song
Almost a year ago I posted a recording of a song I had written for a service at CLC. I used it for a songwriting workshop at Recreate and then invited you to give me your critiques.
To see that post and see what people had to say, check it out here.
Well, I reworked it just a little bit and then recorded it for our Christmas album.
Last year Randy said it would be interesting to hear copies of the song before and after receiving some critiques. So here ya go. The CD version starts with Rachel reciting Mary's words from the verse that the song came from.
Of course, there's nothing to say it can't still be made better. (Hopefully I didn't make it worse. Lol.) So let me know what you think!
Here is both the recording from the last post, and right below it the new version of the song from the CD:
Rewritten Version
